Kiersten White, author of Paranormalcy & Supernaturally joins the Wordplay team.
Learn why Kiersten lies to her kids, hides in the garage, and wrote the worst middle grade beginning ever. Oh, and we also discuss how to make your story beginning more gripping and what makes dialogue work.
Also follow Wordplay Podcast (and the Wordplay team!) To win a copy of Paranormalcy and Supernaturally.
Congratulations to last week’s winners:
diana is the winner of a paperback copy of Nightshade
Michael Runyan is the winner of a hardback copy of Wolfsbane
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I just picked up Supernaturally at the library yesterday and am psyched to read it! Loved Paranormalcy and have gifted it to friends who needed a good book in their lives. Looking forward to hearing the podcast. You guys are great!
I just followed the podcast, Scott, and James. I was already following Nathan and Kiersten.
In other news, I just finished the first draft of my WIP! I’m excited to be starting on edits. I’m keeping your tips in mind!
CV
I followed the podcast on Twitter, and I’ve been a longtime follower of all- y’all.
James–like I really believe you’ll tweet more. Promises, promises.
Kiersten–don’t you dare tweet less! Someone has to pick up James’ slack!
Okay, great job everyone! Just listened to it (actually 3 times) to really cement the concepts in my head. And I was already following all three of you guys, so I added the podcast and Kiersten to my twitter feed…so should I unfollow everyone after this Sunday when I win the hardback copy of Supernaturally so that I have SOME WAY to be eligible for future contests?
I started Supernaturally today during piano lessons. Love how it grabs you from the first paragraph. Kiersten, you’re such a fun read! ♥
Thank you for the give away. I’m now following the podcast.
I already follow Jeff, James, Nathan, Kiersten and the podcast. Guess I’m just a super-fan!
A question perhaps for Nathan. Say you queried an agent a long time ago and they weren’t interested in that project. You have a new project now that you think might be a better match, but they indicate on their blog, etc. they only want to look at a potential client once, sort of a “represent you now-or-never”. Will they really remember, or can we still query them on a new project? Is it bad form to do so?
Thanks, guys! Even though I hear from Jeff several times a week on various writing-related topics, I always learn something new here on the podcasts.
[...] Wordplay Podcast Episode 7: Kiersten White, Beginnings, and Dialogue. The podcast, run in part by James Dashner and Scott Savage, welcomes guest Kiersten White, author of Paranormalcy & Supernaturally. They discuss how to make your story beginning more gripping and what makes dialogue work. Writing Excuses Podcast 6.20. Endings. [...]
So good to have Kiersten on the podcast! She was great!
I loved what she said about beginnings. I know that for me the first chapter I write probably should not end up as the first chapter that readers read. I often find that it takes me a few pages to really work out the kinks and get things rolling.
And I loved James’s suggestion about starting out with a prelude or something else exciting. A lot of fantasy novels seem to do that, perhaps because their first chapters have so much setting, etc., that they have to get out.